Comments on section 2.5.3 and beyond

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SUGGESTION: Would be better to add a choreographyInstanceId to the 
example.

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CORRECTION:
Line 32 add �the� prior to the words �Exception state�

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SUGGESTION: Line 23 � add another example for exceptions

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CORRECTION: Line 29 Replace the word "got" with the word "was"

Received on Tuesday, 7 December 2004 15:04:22 UTC